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Writing · Ages 6–8 · 15 minutes

Keep a Paragraph on One Topic

Find the sentence that drifts away from a topic and replace it with a useful detail.

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Keep a Paragraph on One Topic

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Today I am practising: identifying details that support a paragraph's main focus

1

Topic: feeding a pet rabbit. Choose the unrelated detail: fresh water / rabbit food / my bike is red.

2

Write a replacement detail that belongs with feeding a rabbit.

3

Read: Our class planted beans. We put seeds in soil. My socks have stripes. We watered the pots. Cross out the sentence that wanders.

4

Add one useful detail to the bean paragraph.

5

Write three sentences about making a snack. Keep every sentence about that task.

6

Underline your topic sentence and circle a detail that explains it.

Grown-up guide
  1. Name the topic aloud before judging any detail.
  2. Ask how each sentence helps a reader understand that topic.
  3. Use oral rehearsal when three written sentences are demanding.