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Opinion Writing: Revise a Fuzzy Opinion
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Today I am practising: revising an unclear opinion into a specific claim
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Read: It is good. Circle the missing information.
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Revise it to name what is good.
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Add who is making the choice: I think ___.
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Add one reason with because.
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Circle the words that make your opinion specific.
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Ask an adult to read your sentence and say what choice they heard.
- Use 'specific' to mean that a reader can tell what the writer chose.
- Read the fuzzy sentence aloud before offering a revision model.
- Let the adult repeat only what they understood; use any confusion as revision information.